tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5678124135881519869.post4008365221145186697..comments2012-11-25T14:33:21.606-06:00Comments on Keely Smith's EDM310 Class Blog: Blog Post 8Keely Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00726329843915851911noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5678124135881519869.post-80936880740240079952012-10-22T11:36:51.111-05:002012-10-22T11:36:51.111-05:00Hi Keely! I've just finished reading your blog...Hi Keely! I've just finished reading your blog post, and I found a few errors that I thought I would tell you about:<br /><br />"Richard Miller ask"... should be "Richard Miller asked"<br />"Richard Miller talk"... should be "Richard Miller talked"<br />"I laughed so hard,"... should be "I laughed so hard;"<br />"Could I make"... should be "I could make"<br />"Learning these day"... should be "learning these days"<br />"Come for classrooms"... should be "come from classrooms"<br />"Us new things, with the"... should be "us new things; the"<br /><br />I thought you did a great job with the post and were very thorough! I would just make sure to reread/proofread for grammatical errors next time! <br /><br />Other than that, good job!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11956031729883068714noreply@blogger.com